Comments from TrackCompo #2 jury;

"+ good sample quality
+ nice, fantasy atmosphere, fine and fresh feelings

+/- drums are primitive, but work ok; finger-naps are too much in front, some less use of it could be better; good panning in the percussion

- no variation in the leads, only one instrument playing all the time; that's not a tragedy, still it could be more interesting if complemented by something else
- it is a little too repetitive; many repeated patterns; acc-guitar playis the same chords all the time.
- the rhythm doesn't work very well

The structure of the song is a controversial matter. One may find the chord lines interesting, but others could say the chords and melodies don't have a really good sense in them. Overally, the song has a nice atmosphere, but actually it could be created better."